Roller coaster of death!!

Stories that people tell that people enter the roller coaster and neve
In one terrifying night in every year the roller coaster will open a pr see anyone come out at the end, stories that will haunt family’s forever
ortal to an unknown place if a person is on it, the roller coaster got shut down and was not ride for years until three boys came to visit their grandmother and saw the abundant roller coaster.They were so unsure why it was closed down, one of them looked at the sign and it said ”do not enter.” They heard a voice coming from the roller coaster,”we need help” then the voice faded away.

The boys soon ran home and told each other’s they will never return, The next day they saw their grandmother running to the abundant roller coaster and started talking to it, it was weird so the three young boys went out to investigate, the boys couldn’t hear anything but they could see the Avatar just standing on the track.

Soon the grandma went into a portal with the blue man and disappeared, the boys followed in a rollercoaster cart, when they got in the place there stomach felt so weird because the roller coaster was going to fast, when they go in wicked place they saw  scary masks stuck on the walls,very soon the boys got creeped out and started running, soon the mask’s started talking and the boys started to sprint , soon they ran into her grandmother, she started saying” how ,what, oh my gosh” and then she started freaking out,suddenly the floor open up and sucked the boys and their grandmother and the blue Avater, soon they found hanging at the top of a lava pool, soon a man come wearing black walking with a evil look” you should've not come you little bratz” the boys were scared......

To be Continued

Money in the air!!

In a poor town where people fight for money, every year there would be wars over money, many people would die , families would move away and never return.Soon a family move into the violent town but did not know the town was so harmful, next few weeks there house was robbed day after day, one day the family's money was taken by crooks, they were devastated.

They soon went to a church and started to pray that no one would steal anything  from there home anymore, the next few months nothing was stolen, they were happy but they have no money so they hadn't eaten for months so they prayed and prayed and prayed, the next day the clouds turned green, they never seen clouds like those ever before.

Soon the sky started raining money, the family said it was a “MIRACLE” , everyone got money and for the past few years the whole town had money and more money and even more money, there were no more wars and the town ended up being one of the richest towns in the world.

Danger's of smoking!

In our class we have been researching the danger of smoking.We have been looking for what the smokes does when you inhale it and what's disease you get when you smoke. 

Smoking? Well it’s just not for human’s, people dying from smoking and getting many disease, plus children's inhaling the smoke and dying from it as well. Smoking is just like a bomb, that you take everyday and one day it blows up inside of you.  In my opinion smokes are death sticks in our world.


Smoking is mostly possible to give you a heart disease and eventually kill you, Heart disease and strokes is the most possible disease you will get when you smoke. Smoking can also get you other disease like cancer,AIDS,HIV,Brain damage and many others.

I Believe that smoking is not good for our world. Our world will be better without cigarettes and smokes. Smoking not my future.

School Cross Country

Blue,Red,Yellow and green, It was what everyone was wearing, Sitting on the court waiting for the year 7’s to take off,”bang” as  they took off I saw many other Year 5's and 4's coming back so tired, I ask myself ''How am I going to run all that way without getting puffed out”?

Soon all of the year 8’s stood up to go in their starting position,I was confident until I saw many fit people challenging against me,”Bang”we all took off jogging until we got near to the reserve, buufff! one went past then another ,then another soon I just got tired and started to jog but I did not give up, I caught up to one of our runners and it was Havea, We just ran and ran but we always ran into people so I started to slow down and Havea took off .

Soon I ran into a massive puddle. I got sucked in the mud and it nearly took my shoe off , Soon my shorts were covered with black brownish slimy gunch of mud but its was still fun. Pushing my exhausting body to my limit I sadly came 4th but I still go to the Inter-zone. I am not proud of myself because I could do better but next time I will start training more.

Thanks to Stevie and Samson for checking my work.

The Jamaicans strikes again!!

The most unbelievable thing happened in the Olympic Games,three great runners from “Jamaica”  out ran their opponents in the 200m making them win three medals in one go,”wow”!

Lets take it from the start
As the athletes got ready to show their skills they began jumping up and down and praying and doing all sort of stuff to pump them up,as the hooter went, the athletes got ready in their positions,as the speaker said,”on your mark,get set”baang! off the athletes went,it was tight in the first sprint off until Usain Bolt took his engines to the next level (but not olympic record engine level),he gas it but Yohan Blake wasn't far behind,following Blake was Warren Weir ,all of them gave it all and they made the Jamaicans look better than ever, 1st 2nd 3th Jamaica Jamaica Jamaica,it was a stunning race,this shows never ever underestimate the Jamaican “mon”.

Thanks to Samson for reading my work.

About Tyson Gay

Tyson Gay inspires me because he worked so hard to achieve his goals.Gay was a low graded student in school but his running skills was amazing,he was the state fastest runner in 100m race.

Tyson Gay was born in U.S.A on August 9, 1982  in a city called  Lexington, Kentucky.Tyson competed in numerous olympic games and won gold in 100m,200m and 4x100 meters 2007 Osaka world championship.

Tyson was encouraged by his mother and began to train hard at school and sprinting up  hills near the neighbourhood, Tyson would always train with his sister and began to work harder on his starting technique,Tyson was inspired by her sister and trained to be the best.

Tyson inspired me by making me train harder and making me going to the limit when I sprint.

Thank's to Samson for checking my work.

When is the right time to swear

In our class we have been reading an article about a US town banning swearing. This town is near Boston and they wanted the loud swearing to stop, the residents agreed to fine anyone that swears out loud  $20 US dollars. In the class we had to write about:
 
'When Is The Right Time To Swear'

The right time to swear is never because what you say will demonstrate what kind of person you are. Swearing is a bad thing because it could make families angry and want to get in a brawl with your family. 


In some families there are different rules about profanity (swearing). You can have time-out or worse for swearing, 


Swearing can be so hard to keep in when you're angry at someone or something so make up a word that's not bad like "fudge" instead of saying 'f***'.


Thanks to Samson and Tui for checking my work.